WRITE an approximately one to two page narration of your commercial, one that, like Miller, describes the commercial in detail, but also (like Miller) begins to introduce your more explicit argument.
After you’ve narrated the most important details of your commercial, introduce a thesis paragraph where you explicitly state what your ad appears to be about and what it’s really up to.
This article is portraying a commercial
Example of the first page of my essay “Getting Dirty by Miller” http://www.turksheadreview.com/library/miller-gettingdirty.pdf
********** A commercial that I picked is
What my teacher is trying to explain is , the getting dirty article is about a commercial based on woman control over a man by changing his soap.
I have to write about my own commercial in the way that miller starts off the getting dirty commercial. On the first page of the reading is an example on how it is supposed to be written. I picked the AXE commercial above.